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Michtam of Jaddish
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Michtam of Jaddish |
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DMP Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 13Oly, WA, the states |
blah, blah [This message has been edited by DMP (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
hmmmm am not sure i understand the numbered line format, but whtat the poem writes is wonderful welcome  |
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DMP Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 13Oly, WA, the states |
hEart. THe number lines is from the version in the bible, you know how each line is number hence: So and So 25:13 or what have you. THe numbers really mean nothing in this piece except to hold to the original. thanks. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is gorgeous...would love more info on this...welcome, welcome... |
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DMP Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 13Oly, WA, the states |
Thank you. More info...I wrote this late one night in a hotel in Seattle. I couldn't sleep so I opened up the bible and decided to re-write parts of it. I found the Michtam in Psalms and line for line re-wrote it trying to keep the same feel and structure. Jaddish is a reaccuring Muse (I hate that word, but it fits) in my writing. She is the object of affection in the few "love" poems I write. Thanks for your interest. Any more questions, I would be happy to answer. DMP |
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DMP Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 13Oly, WA, the states |
If interested, this comes from Psalms 16: Michtam(also Miktam) of David. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks...will do. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family! This is indeed interesting. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special message.  |
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DMP Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 13Oly, WA, the states |
Thank you. It's good to get some feed back on my stuff, and am greatful for the oppurtunity. DMP |
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