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LiLOnE
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since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma

0 posted 2000-07-18 02:54 PM


My Two Worlds

I have a dream
Of a world so great
And when I sleep
I go there.
But when I wake
I face reality
And realize it was all a dream.
This world was real
But not you see
This world had peace
Between you and me
I love this world
I go to when I sleep
I love the peace
And tranquillity
I wake up and look around
And realize I don’t want to be here
There’s to much hate and ignorance you see,
I wanna go back, I wanna stay asleep
But I would give it all up
If my dreams became real
And earth became this place
Where love replaces hate
And for once
There was no greed or envy
No spite or hate
Just love and peace
That’s all I need
We can make it real
It’s up to you
You just gotta want it
And then my dream will forever be
REALITY.


~*~LiLOnE~*~


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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2000-07-20 06:29 AM


Wouldn't it be nice if our dreams were our reality and our reality could be our dreams???  Nice thoughts, LilOne...      





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-20-2000).]

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-20 07:50 AM


LiLOnE...

        I've had the same dream for years,
   and you put it into words for me......
   This was wonderful, and I thank you for
                 writing it!!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



LiLOnE
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma
3 posted 2000-07-21 01:38 PM


Nan -Thanx so much   Yeah it would be nice wouldn't it...

Sunny-Thank you and your welcome!! hehe...
I think this is a dream we all commonly share  

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