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The rain
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The rain |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Secrets fall gracefully from her breath soundlessly sleeping she dreams of his touch Revealing herself to only one he watches her as the rain starts to come Her softness of mouth the shape of her eyes the peace on her face that which is inside Quietly, she opens her eyes to the one she loves the one laying next to her keeping her warm And a smile comes over her face as she hears the rain and all of it's grace. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
nice images, Michael G ... nice ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Secrets fall gracefully from her breath soundlessly sleeping she dreams of his touch Revealing herself to only one he watches her as the rain starts to come =========== And a smile comes over her face as she hears the rain and all of it's grace. ========== as is this poem...all of grace.. very nice indeed... there are few things more sensual than rain and .... well, you know  excellent poem here Michael later-rain-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Michael...... I can almost hear the rain fall! Your writing is beautiful and romantic, I really love this one...... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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