Open Poetry #8 |
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(RP from DP)Silk Ribbon Bands |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
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~Silk Ribbon Bands~ ~~~ silk ribbon bands 'round knees tickled shy behind curtains soft of wrinkled linen by a window wide with sea breeze air and filtered sunlight skies. ~~~~~ resting there in scallop shell concealing all the storms breathing cleansing breaths ashore wishing all was well. ~~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
as sweet as a sea breeze...and soft as talcum...quite lovely...you brought me there. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
very cool, SpitFire ... nice thoughts here ... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A beautiful breath of poetry, refreshing and serene. wonderful poem. ![]() "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Spitfire this is lovely... mystic laced with a touch of sensuality perfect imagery wonderful writing jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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