Open Poetry #8 |
(RP from DP)Silk Ribbon Bands |
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Silk Ribbon Bands~ ~~~ silk ribbon bands 'round knees tickled shy behind curtains soft of wrinkled linen by a window wide with sea breeze air and filtered sunlight skies. ~~~~~ resting there in scallop shell concealing all the storms breathing cleansing breaths ashore wishing all was well. ~~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
as sweet as a sea breeze...and soft as talcum...quite lovely...you brought me there. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
very cool, SpitFire ... nice thoughts here ... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A beautiful breath of poetry, refreshing and serene. wonderful poem. "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Spitfire this is lovely... mystic laced with a touch of sensuality perfect imagery wonderful writing jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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