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I Miss You
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I Miss You |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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I miss your touch your smile your breath your shine your eyes your nose your ears your knees your sweetness your kindness your hair your neck your back your legs your feet your toes your elbows your walk your voice your face but most of all I miss YOU [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AAWWWWW Jeffrey...now I got tears to take to bed with me never say never |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
awwww that was sad but good! Sauni |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
How sweet!! If only we all had someone to miss us like this....wonderful poem.  Christina =^..^= |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
I hope you see her soon Jeffrey. (sigh) Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh this is sad...but I like it!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I know where you're coming from with this one.....I feel that way right now!! excellent peice, quite touching "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I'm hoping she'll be back to you soon. Send her this, no woman could resist! |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Thats soooo cute I know the feeling very well... Its a horrible feeling to miss some one .. but when you see them again its the best feeling in the world!! I'll look for more of your writings!! See ya round! LiLOnE |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Paula, So did I (sigh) Saunni, Thanks Christina, If only Kay-Lynn, I'm sure I will Bridgette, Thanks Martini, Thanks Jan, I did and she accepted  LilOne, Welcome to passion's, and thank you |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Heartfelt writing my friend. I hope with all my heart she returns to you. Best wishes. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very sweet writing Jeffrey, I'm so glad she accepted!! |
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