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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 It’s time to take back all that I gave to you Stars placed in your gaze belong in night skies Ocean breeze upheld your whispers as they flew Bequeathed now to moonlit walks not mid your lies ~*~ Whispers of your butterfly winged promises Should be free to float without worry or care Golden splash of moon dust placed upon your smile Should not be held onto for something so rare ~*~ Peace of sunrise that rested in your embrace Given now to the hope that within me flows Petal soft dew that rested upon your lips Bestowed back upon the budding morning rose ~*~ The angelic glow that I placed around love Removed now from your mortal skin Pain held in your absence fit once like a glove Forgotten.....As I let the healing begin ~*~ Powers and gifts I bestowed in true loves name Returned to where their forms are truly alive Last of all I take my heart from your cold hand I Once doubted... but now know...I will survive ~*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let the worshiping begin ... It’s time to take back all that I gave to you Stars placed in your gaze belong in night skies Ocean breeze upheld your whispers as they flew Bequeathed now to moonlit walks not mid your lies ~*~ Whispers of your butterfly winged promises Should be free to float without worry or care Golden splash of moon dust placed upon your smile Should not be held onto for something so rare ~*~ Peace of sunrise that rested in your embrace Given now to the hope that within me flows Petal soft dew that rested upon your lips Bestowed back upon the budding morning rose ------------------------ Pain held in your absence fit once like a glove Forgotten.....As I let the healing begin ~*~ Last of all I take my heart from your cold hand I Once doubted... but now know...I will survive ~*~ ========================== oh man......YOU KNOW this poem is PERFECT..right? you KNOW this poems is awesome...right? please submit for book girl... I KNOW I said that about the last few in a row.. BUT EACH NEW POEM is more amazing than the one before... dont make me beg baby ...  (i got strong knees) lol man do i love this poem you too SS jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
beautiful poem ... and an interesting look at starting back at a new begining  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, WOW!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!! You are butterfly and I can hear you roar my friend. This is awesome poetry. You will survive . . . I just know it!!! Great writing. I hope all is well with you. Take care. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This has everything, Butterflies! Beauty, strength, hurt, hope! Wonderful poem! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sweet biased J.M....lol no begging this one is just for Me..it would be like having people vote on the content of my heart but I do appreciate your words so very much...you KNOW that right??? Thank you as always for being there......and just being YOU~ Rex* Thank you so much for reading~ LW* Yes...and so will you!! Thank you for reading and for caring~ Denise* Many thanks, coming from you that means alot to me~ [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just such a wonderful look at starting again...great from beginning to end never say never |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Perfect beyond words |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bdc-This is my kinda poem. I absolutely loved this and the pain within in it is so vivid, yet the knowledge that you are strong enough to survive and go on with your life is put forth with perfection. I would have to say that of all the ones of yours I have been blessed to read that this is by far my favorite and that was not a simple task on your part. Well done my friend. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
WOW Butterflies! You are the queen of gorgeous imagery, I swear...such lovely words woven with the gloriousness of healing..a masterpiece you have here. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Awesome work Butterfly, your strength shows through in this one! Take care my friend! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Strong ... powerful ... and truly inspiring! Excellent survival instincts Butterflies ... no question you'll make it through with this determination. Really well done, loved it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow...very deep and moving...liked this so much!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh sweet butterflies...A truly touching piece *HUG* very intense poem but at the same time alot of beauty comes with heartache (hope you know what I mean) lovely Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Paula* Thank you so very much for reading. Starting over can be a wonderful thing! Jeffrey* Much to kind thank you.Mark* Thank you from the bottom of my heart your sweet comments are always much appreciated and add a spark of sunshine to my day. Krista* Thank you for your kind comments... for those I will forgive you for making me cry with your touching poetry Eagle* It's easy to be strong behind words thank you so much for your kindness my friend Kit* Thank you so much for reading and your heart felt replies. Bridgette* I appreciate you taking the time to read and reply. Thank you very much. Tracie* I understand very well...it's always a wonderful thing when we can turn our dark moments into poetry...like giving the sadness butterfly wings. Thank you so much. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
hi BDC ... great little piece of work here ... Ocean breeze upheld your whispers as they flew The angelic glow that I placed around love Removed now from your mortal skin (book material) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed this much.Keep it up! |
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