Open Poetry #8 |
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To Soar With Angels |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada ![]() |
To Soar With Angels Oh gentle wings of angels fair, Enfold me with your warmth and care; Take hold and raise my spirits high, To fly with you amidst the sky. Surround me with your wondrous glow, And carry me, that I might know, The visions that you see each night, Upon the trails of heaven’s light. Lift up my soul to soar above, And gaze upon the wonders of The world untainted from your eyes, That I might see beyond this guise. To drift upon the twilight haze, And view the sights from angel’s gaze; To glide upon the twilight sun, And see the good in everyone. Enrich my heart with heaven’s peace, And grace me with your sweet release, While flying high above the clouds, That I might make my Father proud. Beneath the heaven’s sparkling lights, Enraptured with the glow of night, Bring forth the calm and soothing feel, Of tender love, this soul to heal. /Kit McCallum |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah Kit to be wrapped in an angels embrace...safe and loved...what a wonderful piece you have written here. never say never |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
outstanding poem ... thanks Kit ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
for crying out loud, Kit, quit writing my poems for me! This was excellent, just what I would like to write myself, except that you KEEP BEATING ME to them! Can you tell I like it? Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
enjoyed this very much uplifting thoughts easy to read ... with a good flow wonderful poem Kit ![]() |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
you lifted my spirits with this one....cant express how much i enjoyed it! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Kit a really beautiful poem. It had my soul soaring to heavenly heights why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kit* This is absolutely angelic!! You have me ~floating~ The title is perfect and the gossamer weave is exquisite! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Kit; This is positively magnificent! I feel so at peace after reading it, truly inspirational. I wish you had posted this in spiritual. come on over there and write us something, would you? Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, how lovely this is! I really enjoyed it. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Kit this is abosolutely beautiful......you had me flying above the clouds with you all the way......and what a tender loving and peaceful ending....very spiritual and moving piece of work.......take care ....ethome |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kit, What a beautiful poem you have written. I must read more of your work. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Paula: Thank you so much Paula ... to be safe and warm indeed, what a wonderful feeling! ![]() ~MA Miller: Your welcome MA ... and thank you so much for reading! ![]() ~Sunshine: LOL! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ~Rex: Thanks Rex ... glad you enjoyed. I'm happy to be uplifting now and again! ![]() ~Princess: Thank you so much for the lovely comment Princess ... much appreciated! ![]() ~Brian: Thanks Brian ... glad you came along for the ride! It's nice up here eh? ![]() ~Butterflies: Oh, what a wonderful comment Butterflies ... thank you sooooo much! ![]() ~Ellie: Thank you Ellie! I almost did post it to Spiritual, but I've been so busy in the Teen forum these days, I didn't want everyone in Open to think I'd disappeared entirely (LOL). Thanks again Ellie ![]() ~Poet deVine: Thank you so much Sharon ... I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Much appreciation ![]() ~Ethome: Wow ... thank you for such a lovely comment Ethome ... I so appreciate it, I'm glad you enjoyed the flight! ![]() Much appreciation to all (and please don't think I've disappeared from the sight. I do apologize if I've missed responding to some wonderful poems ... but those teens are busy over there, it's hard to keep up - having fun though!) Thanks again everyone! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Bill: Ooops, you snuck in while I was responding Bill. Thank you so much for the lovely comment, and again, welcome to Passions! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what beautiful images you have brushed with your pen. Such a peaceful, inspiring poem. This is soooo lovely. Bonnie |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
very lovely and calming..perfect on this night ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
So peaceful hon...heavenly ![]() Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh My!! Wonderful!!!!!! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
My dear twin, This was absolutely heavenly Liz |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Bonnie: Thanks so much Bonnie! Very appreciated! ![]() ~Maureen: Soft welcome ... much thanks Maureen! ![]() ~Tracie: Heavenly response Tracie, thanks so much! ![]() ~Sauni: Oh boy ... thank you! Much appreciated Sauni! ![]() ~Elizabeth: Twinning with you Liz, is heavenly indeed, and the greatest compliment I could imagine! Much love and thanks! ![]() Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Kit! I love it! Denise |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Denise: Thank you soooo much Denise ... I'm glad you enjoyed! ![]() Much appreciation, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Just 'Heavenly' ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Kit, I had to go back for a second and third read. This one is just beautiful. The flow is wonderful. It just sings. ![]() |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Kit-- I don't even know how to start!! That was so incredibly beautifull you took my breath away! yet another poem *I wish I wrote!* ![]() ![]() ~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very, very beautiful, Kit ![]() |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Marge: ![]() ![]() ~Eloise: Thank you so much for the wonderful words Eloise! ~LilOne: Ahhhh, thank you for such a sweet reply ... much appreciatied LilOne! ~Balladeer: Very, very much appreciated Michael, thank you! ![]() Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
Lovely poem, Kit, I really enjoyed it. I am new to this website. Look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kit, How did I miss this gem? It is a treasure and I enjoyed it very much. Heavenly images!! Wonderful writing!! ![]() LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Cathy: Thank you so much Cathy ... I really hope you enjoy your stay here! ![]() ~LoneWolf: Oh, thank you LoneWolf, what a beautiful comment! With much appreciation, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kit, Where was I when this poem came here... so pleased to have read it... regards, sudhir |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
Kit I am a true admirer of your work. You have a deffinate style about you that is amazing. You are truly talented!! |
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