Distant love (another haiku, or is it a senyru?)

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Distant love (another haiku, or is it a senyru?)

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-17 06:28 PM

Bimonthly love heals
the heart that craves it's lost time
when nothing else holds.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-07-17 06:43 PM

Michael.....

     This is special......a little love is
  better than none.....

           You do a great Haiku!

~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-18 12:00 PM

well if we learned anything today...
then i believe its a senyru...

either way...its very cool...
"when nothing else holds"
very cool line
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

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