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With Intent
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With Intent |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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With Intent You speak to her with eyes of love, Of simple treasures bound By silken threads that join two hearts A poetry of sounds. The texture of her silken skin, The velvet that unfolds, Into the warmth, a flame is fed. A glimmer becomes bold. Her body teased, a trace of kiss, arousal with intent. The moment prints the freefall of A heated body spent. A softened moan, a gasp from lips Intrigued, becomes of her Surprised release, control now lost, A spreading to occur. How intimate these words can be When thoughts slip out and trace, The outline of your memories That cause your heartbeat's pace. The reigning of this language sought, A myst of passions scent To stir emotions kissed by words, As always, with intent. M 7*2k |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I found this to be totally awesome! Great writing. Sauni Sauni :) |
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gem Junior Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 39 |
I think this is a great poem! And it's great for all the right reasons. You really know HOW to write poetry. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How intimate these words can be When thoughts slip out and trace, The outline of your memories That cause your heartbeat's pace. The reigning of this language sought, A myst of passions scent To stir emotions kissed by words, As always, with intent. ================= this is EXCELLENT ... perfect...senusual and passion filled... very well written out thoughts... and that last verse is PERFECT.. "with intent"..very cool line  superb take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
mmoonchild ... love this piece ... easy read ... thanks. The reigning of this language sought, A myst of passions scent ... very cool line |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Saunni...I am beginning to think you enjoy my words... *w ~~soft hugs and thanks..you are greatly appreciated Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
gem ..I am hoping this works, I froze on my last reply...thank you for your nice words I wanted to tell you as a new member, too..you are in great company here of fine writers...I wonder what took me so long to travel to this destination..I hope you enjoy your stay as I am enjoying mine. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Janet Marie ..sometimes in a conversation on here a phrase pops up and I hold it within my mind 'til I am ready to use it...such was the case with "with intent" although we were talking about another subject...I find this year my mind is constantly searching out the beauty in words to express my thoughts..thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
MA Miller Thank you for your kind words..I have a special friend that when I want him to know I am thinking of him reign and myst get used and spelled that way.... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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