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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
Nobody likes my work, All I want is a simple smirk. Nobody looks at this, In my mind, That's a total dis. Nobody wants to know what's on my mind, Look inside and maybe you'll find. A person looking for a friend, Someone to help him understand. Life and the way things are, Hey alright, A shooting star. Now make a wish dear child, Anything even something outta the wild. Wish it true though son, And when morning comes and night is done, It will come true. Here's my wish I wish to you, Read my writing, See what I have to say. Tell me you'll be a friend and stay, For a while nothing to dismay. Nobody reads this because I'm a lonely child, My wish, Came outta the wild.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is very good.....you showed your heart and feelings in this piece and that's what makes poetry what it is....yes, it's busy here and sometimes things don't get read as much as we would like but keep writing  |
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