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Bitterness Abounds
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Monkeyman New Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 1 |
Pointy birds, pointy birds, Pointy, Pointy; Dull birds, dull birds STOP!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
They can. They do. And they will. It just hurts like hell in the meantime. Welcome, love... |
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Asma M. Ahmad Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 19 |
Hey! this is really clever! You've expressed so much with only 4 words repeated in differant ways.And i love the way the title is half the poem.Great work! Best wishes Asmoon "..Infinite passion and the pain of finite hearts that yearn." Robert Browning |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is quite a piece here....simple...and unique!!!!! LIKED IT!!!!!  Welcome to Passions!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Unique piece for sure enjoyable welcome to passions Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Back to top---just cause I said so,--grin--- oh the power of welcome home.... |
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