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Kyle aka Huck
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-07-16 10:03 AM


As sure as the rising and falling sun,
I knew you were the one.
With everything we've said and done,
I knew you were the one.
Thru all the hurt and pain,
I knew you were the one.
Nothing to lose much more to gain,
I knew you were the one.
So much to give so much to see,
I knew you were the one.
Tell me can how it can be,
I knew you were the one.
That somebody doesn't have you,
I knew you were the one.
Tell me now is this love true?
I knew you were the one.
Yes this is true love dont you see?
I knew you were the one.
So i ask you now....
Will you marry me?
I know you're the one.....

© Copyright 2000 Kyle Finn - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-07-16 10:54 AM


I hope it works out for you. You certainly outlined enough reasons for consideration. I enjoyed the read very much.
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-16 11:23 AM


Kyle aka Huck.....

     I enjoyed reading this, and I hope
     'the one' said yes!!!!!

        By the way......

              A very warm welcome
                 to Passions!!


Live for today and enjoy the moment.....


Kyle aka Huck
Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA
3 posted 2000-07-17 05:56 AM


thanks, i haven't asked yet though...i hope she does too
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-07-17 07:07 AM


If she is "the one" then of course she will
say yes........someday    For now enjoy
the ride that love takes you on!  Heartfelt
work Kyle, I enjoyed it~

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2000-07-17 07:12 AM


Very cool....I hope she does too!!  Nice Work!!  Liked it!!  
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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