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Do you remember....
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Do you remember.... |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada 
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Do you remember when we met? I do You drank my entire bottle of Blue lagoon Do you remember when we became friends? I do You were setting me up with him Do you remember when I gained trust in you? I do You were fixing everything with him Do you remember when I realized you were a great friend? I do It was when you were dragging me out after him Do you remember when I got over him? I do It was while partying with you Do you remember when you asked me out? I do It was at a party at your house Do you remember our first date? I do It was under an umberella at a resturant on main street Do you remember our first kiss? I do It was on my doorstep at 3 am Do you remember when I feel in love with you? I do It was sitting by the fire at your cottage Do you remember when you firsst said I love you? I do It was our six month anniversary Do you remember when I knew it would last forever? I do It was when I said I love you too. < !signature--> "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost [This message has been edited by Martini (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
beautiful poem......remembering it all...from beginning to hopefully neverending if your real lucky!!! Great writing!!  Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Martini..... This has got to be my favorite, so far! (Definitely voted for this one). I loved it...it flowed through me like music, and I felt good all the way to the end......... Nice work, my friend!! Life is but a dream... so sleep easy... |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
set me up and knocked me down with this one. loved the last line thanks for this |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very nice memories ... a happy ending...my favorite kind this is great... very enjoyable read... welcome to passions so nice to meet you take care jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So like a song, it is! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
JulieAnn - Thank you for your kinds words. Sunny1 - I'm so glad you enjoyed it.... Thanks so much for the support Kevin - i aim to please I'm glad you liked it. and you are very welcome Janet Marie - thanks so much for the welcome and it's nive to meet you too I'm glad you enjoyed it Sunshine- I never thought of it like a song....  great thought |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martini, This is the first poem that I have read of yours, as I am really a newcomer. I intend to read many more. A wonderful poem, a wonderful story. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Bill thanks for you kind words. I hope you nejoy passions as much as I do. And i llok forward to reading your work as well take care |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Martini-I can't believe I almost missed this one. It sure was worth catching up to and as much as I have enjoyed your works thus far this is my favorite of yours so far. What's next? Love it. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
mark... as always such kinds words!! thanks so much!! We'll have to see what's next. I must tell you I love your work |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I wish you the best of luck in your life |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
nice one...good luck....its time for me to leave...good luck with you all guyz Sincerely a_l |
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Impassionata Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 26Alberta,Canada |
Dear Martini, LOved your poem, so like a beautiful love song! Awesome! |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
A_L: thanks so much, good luck with you too. Impassionata: thanks so much.... I just spoke from the heart. he's a special guy and he inspires me on a daily basis. |
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