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Therapy, on something lost dear to me
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Therapy, on something lost dear to me |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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On my pants a stain of blue I saw it and I cried It was the waters of Cozumel or at least someone lied Cozumel bled its blue all over my khaki slacks The only thing salty were my tears leaving tracks You see I bought a keychain to remember Cozumel Filled with ocean water, white sand, and a shell It came to be my official focused happy spot It was ole Cozumel I gave it no second thought Cozumel oh Cozumel I learned a thing today Don’t believe in Spanish what the peddlers say Cozumel oh Cozumel you are a blue dye stain I must now buy new pants and I guess a new keychain |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is cute.....Liked it!!!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How do you do it? so many questions for the w.o.w. machine....and somehow, I'd rather not know the answers...Love ya, sweets, and I thank you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... Walty Walty Walty...  You're not going soft are you??? LOl... actually my friend...this is awesome...me likes a lot me does hugs K |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Poor baby ! Why do I like this ? Beats me ... but I can just hear WayOutWalt crying to Cozumel - Oh, Cozumel ! Poor baby ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Walt, like I said earlier, I really like it alot enjoyed it very much |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Me too! I pictured you singing this with all the appropriate dramatics!  Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Poor Walt! You thought that was water? Oh, dear, let me explain the economics of souvenirs.... I like your poem!  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ROTFLMAO.......i can just see you...perfect never say never |
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