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| Open Poetry #8 |
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This Perfect Little Rhyme |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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This Perfect Little Rhyme ~*Marge Tindal*~ I found a little rhyme I want it to be mine I looked around and finally found the perfect meter the perfect sound I was going to share it but it took so long to snare it that I'd like to keep it secret for just a little while I know you want to hear it but I just couldn't bear it if this perfect little poem ended up showing up in a brand new book where folks would take a look at the tiny perfect thought that I want to be just mine So I hope you'll pardon me if I don't share it willingly For I really, really love it I just can't let go of it For the very life of me I truly hope you see I'm just not ready to set my poem free |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
That was too cool! Sauni |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a feeling and what a way to express it... Marge, this was enjoyable... as always... regards, sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Margie, let us have a look At your little poem for the book I promise I will close my eyes I promise not to plagiarize But now my curiosity Has really got the best of me So just e-mail it right to me My lips are sealed as you can see (Is this one of those poems about nothing?) Liz |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is sweet, Marge! A perfect little rhyme Which caught you just in time. You wrote something very witty About a private little ditty. I loved this, Marge!! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge PLEASE  Can't wait till you feel you can show us  Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Ok when ever your ready. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ Thank you ... glad you liked it. Sudhir~ I always appreciate your comments. Elizabeth~ It's Nuttin' Honey ! Lil' Lizzie~ Oh, I love your quip ! Love ya' Tracie~ Oh, I felt a little goofy ... and wrote this little 'spoofy' ! Seymour~ Thank you for your patience. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very cute. Take your time and enjoy it for awhile. You know we ain't gonna go nowhere anyway; we will be right here waiting.  |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
At least it got every one thinking, an inspiring, fun, Grovey poem, I enjoyed reading it and the comments other people wrote almost the same amount, clever . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Oh, gosh ! But - but - that's all there is to it ! NOW THE PRESSURE'S ON ! AngelSwing~ Thanks for liking it. I also LOVE to read all of the replies ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, It is so nice to see you having fun, and you DO IT SO WELL my friend, and the poem is a keeper for sure. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
So you wrote a little rhyme never mind if you dont share it in time For my troubled feelings i've temporarily parted As this little ditty have amused my heart COOL |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--you always manage to bring a smile, you must be magic...is that it? |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well, Marge, I see your lovely words are as respected and inspiring here as always...what a wonderful way to say: you have a little secret thought in no way can be sold or bought when ready you will gladly share and post it here with tender care... just wanted to add "my touch" ~~softly Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ You know me so well. Always fun sharing with friends. Kaile~ Thank you for that little poetic reply. I can see you have fun too ! Martie~ Ooooooooh, yeah ! I'm just a musing magician ! But you're not getting my Bud-Rhyme !  MMoonChild~ My friend - I'm glad to have your 'touch'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
see what happens when you tease? this was so much fun |
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Asma M. Ahmad Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 19 |
Marge,You've already posted your perfect little rhyme!Thankyou,this was fun to read. Best wishes Asmoon "..Infinite passion and the pain of finite hearts that yearn." Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ LOL ! I'm a 'tease' alright !Asma~ Awwwwwww ! Thank you. It was a fun thing for sure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge that's a pretty darn good poem explaining why you don't want to share the perfect little rhyme.....I think I've been had - Marge you smoothie...........Very well done!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Ahhhhhh ! But - ya' 'been had' by the 'best' ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jefsand Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 18 |
thanks, your poem made me smile. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JefSand~ It is I who thank you. Glad to give you a smile. Welcome to the wonderful world of Passionate Poets. I'm pleased to be your first reply. Please enjoy your stay - if you have any questions, please e-mail me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Just delightful, Marge! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ This was so perfect!!!! I really enjoyed the read my friend. Any book would be lucky to have it included!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks, gal. I like all the little smiles it created.LoneWolf~ Tee-hee ! Not a 'bookable' piece - just glad to share a little giggle here and there. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Lovely as always you've done it again. Very lifting and inspiring. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You be the queen, Marge, the QUEEN of rhyme! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyWeb~ Thanking you so much for liking the 'lift.' Corinne~ Did you just 'crown' me ? You're A-Okay in this lady's book too ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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UFgirl05 Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 10Winter Haven, FL, USA |
It wass very cute, I liked it.......it was a perfect little rhyme |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) OH Marge!! I'm smiling with this one.....It's always a joy to read your sunshine!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
UFGirl~ Thank you and welcome to Passion's. Winter Haven, FL you're from ??? Why we're a stones throw away from each other. ! Hmmmmm ! UF huh ? Welcome from a 'NOLE ! ButterfliesDC~ What an ADORABLE graphic ! Thank you for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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