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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Fate Fate is the path That brought me to you Fate is the binds That no longer need glue Fate is the sun That continues to shine Fate is the reason We continue to climb Fate is the way We need it to be Fate is the love I continue to see Fate is resilient It knows no real time Fate is the outcome Your destiny and mine Fate is the fortune We wanted so much Fate is the chance That caught us by luck Fate is the wonder Of why it must end Fate is the answer It’s why I still fend To hold on to that Which I feel is true Fate is the path That brought me to you. [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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Bessy41 Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 12 |
"Fate is the path That brought me to you" Hopefully fate will lead you on. Nice writing. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Bessy Hopefully so. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
reminds me of a favorite song, "simple twist of fate..." You're writing beautifully these days...nice work, Rich...hugs to you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
fate takes us places we never thought of going never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Spiked* This is so "simple" and yet so deep...does that make sense??? Fate is something that most people don't believe in until it touches their life...beautiful work~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I echo BDC's reply. This is perfect in it's simplicity  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
cant fight fate... very cool poem spiked checked out your webpage... also cool.. VH rules...  later jm |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all so very much. It is one of those simple poems that could be added to all day. There are no bounderies to what and where fate can be. Thanks, Rich |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Fate is the path That brought me to you. This poem especially the last two lines holds special meaning for me. A wonderful poem Spiked.< ! the plot of our life sweats in the dark like a face the mystery of childbirth, of childhood itself grave visitations what is it that calls to us?" patti smith [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Brian |
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