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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Reflections ~*Marge Tindal*~ You fell upon my day sunlight refracting through the trees Came in on whispered memory as soft as gentle breeze Played around the meadow as a butterfly in fluttered flight Sipping nectar from your memory relished with delight The babbling brook sparkles with reflections of a time when we were all that mattered in our unhurried rhyme Night fell - I caught it one moonbeam at a time You twinkled as the starlight dancing through my mind Remembering you and counting sheep Always forgetting the number Contemplating the coming dreams of you within my slumber If upon the dawn I awaken with thoughts of you in mind I know that they are merely reflections of thoughts you left behind *This piece was inspired by ETHome Thank you, my friend. quote: ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge..... If EThome inspired this one, I am grateful to him also!! This painted such beautiful pictures in my mind....... As always, your writing sings with color.... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Marge! Sweet reflections!  Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I'm going to reflect on this one for a while  Beautiful and uplifting, as always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Yes, he did and I so greatly appreciate it. Hats off to ETHome ! Denise~ Thanks. Reflections give us the opportunity to see ourselves as well as others. Balladeer~ LOL @ you ! Reflect my friend - I love ya'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dear Marge, have you thought about submitting this for the book, Marge? It's quite lovely. I like how it shows the strength of your bond with others, almost telepathically. Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Thanks for the *vote* of confidence, hon. I'm about booked-out ! I do appreciate you suggesting it though. Love ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well I'm glad I inspire someone once in awhile. I feel quite complimented by the fact that you remembered that part of the verse from 'Running To Be Free' and turned the idea into a fine poetic work of your own. I love that first verse..... "You fell upon my day sunlight refracting through the trees Came in on whispered memory as soft as gentle breeze." That's what I call poetic reminiscence of the finest kind to start a poem about reflections... Take care and keep em comin.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ I am so pleased that you found it so that it gives me an opportunity to tell you how much I appreciate the inspiration. Your poem 'Running To Be Free' was so lovely and that phrase kept coming back to play in my mind. I'm very glad you liked it. Thank you again - my pleasure to find that little gem and have the inspiration hit me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge lovely reflections..a beautiful read Inspiration is the theme of this place I think and it's just so wonderful that we can all share in each others writings and get inspiration to write great pieces such as this...well done to you and to EThome Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful reflections, Marge... I ponder the reflections of you in my mirrored soul... Resplendent smile on your face is for me a looking glass... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thanks. I love the early morning sunshine of your replies ! Yes, the inspiration from the words of others is yet another color of ink for my pen. Sudhir~ What a thoughtful reply. Thank you my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
this is a great poem, i wish i could write like you, im not a good writer but i like writing so i do it anyways and my mom (Paula Finn) says hi |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--this in incredible writing...you fell upon my day....oh I love the very idea...I wish I had written it...and then..sipping nectar from your memory..sigh..so beautiful! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Your reflections on this day are as glorious as the day itself was my friend. Way to go EThome for inspiring such wonderful poetry!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kyle~ I appreciate your reply. Hon, as long as you like writing - you're a-okay with me ! (Hi Mom-of-Kyle) Martie~ One heck of a compliment, my friend. You know I appreciate you. LoneWolf~ The 'reflections' continue into the night. Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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