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Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying
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Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying ~*Marge Tindal*~ When shadows of the night surround and heartache comes again to call Softly into a satin pillow your tears begin to fall Dreams won't come Memories won't go The night holds the aches of long, long ago Too fresh to forget Too intense to recall They come without mercy invading your all Not hiding in the shadows of the night as they should Why can't they bring smiles as you hoped they would Pillow-cased through the night wrapped in an ache of their own Don't let the sun catch you crying Dry your tears before break of dawn New memories in the making on the day in shades of umber Dawning on new dreams propelling you through your slumber Don't let the sun catch you crying For the day should bring you glee When shadows of the new night come I trust you'll think of me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You knew the title would draw me in and I wondered if it would be similar to the song...but instead, I've now got the melody to accompany new words... well done, m'friend... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge.... You're capturing all the 'sun' people with this one..... I thoroughly enjoyed this, but what caught my eye was the unique layout of the lines!! (Reminds me of an hourglass.) As always.....very nicely done... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Too fresh to forget Too intense to recall They come without mercy invading your all" Powerfully written Marge! Why is it that heartache comes calling so often as you rest your head to sleep? I know this all too well ... beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ We've got the *sunshine* flowing today, huh ?  Sunny1~ How perceptive of you to 'see' the hourglass. And how like the sands of time - do our memories flow. *Just look at all the ~SUN SHINING~ on this page ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Enjoyed this, Marge....!! Who did that song, "Don't Let the Sun Catch You Crying?" God, I used to love that song... hehe... It's killing me trying to remember... but I'm singing it in my head and probably will for the rest of the day.... so .... THANKS! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ You've got that right ! This one was for a special friend whose nights have been a little rough. Thanks, gal friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
well ... you drew in the brightest stars ... how about if an assteroid tells you that he loved your poem very well done Marge |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a postive way for me to dry my own tears!!! Thanks Marge!!! Loved this!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...this hits close to home...hiding the pain away where no one else can see... nice |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Margie-girl you've penned a melody of sunshine with this gem...... very cool presentation as well... you seem to have a never ending source of inspiration... you crank these beauties out so consistantly... you must have muse machine, a poetry tree  wonderful writing later-sunshine-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Missed you in the cyber-speed reply zone ! I know that it made the Top 40 Charts in 1964 done by Gerry and The Pacemakers. Rex~ ASTRONOMICAL ! JustBleu~ Glad it helped. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ The sun shines on new memories-in-the-making ! JanetMarie~ You do know that I have a 'musing tree' - it sheds profusely ! Glad always to share. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
GERRY & THE PACEMAKERS!!! THANK you, Marge... LOL that's exactly right! Of course, that was a few years before i was born *wink*, so i don't remember it hitting the top of the charts ... but boy, what a great song... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I saw the title and like some of the others the song went round in my head...I'll have to learn your words and sing that instead.. HUSG |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
beautiful Marge---I always feel like you're writing just for me---the intimacy with which you write is another trademark of your abundant gift...thank you for this... |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge, Beautiful, full of intensity and hope, thank you for sharing your thoughts so tenderly. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ LOL ! Just spinning those 'cradle' platters for ya'! RainbowGirl~ Hey you ! Just so you're smiling - that's what matters. *H U G S* Serenity~ God ! What a compliment ! Know what ? Goodness knows I write for somebody and I never know for sure who sends the spirit my way. If it is sometimes yours then know that I appreciate it. Gemini~ Thank you for reading it so tenderly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--can I come rake up the leaves from your poetry tree? I know I could use them as a great mulch for growing something beautiful! Wonderful poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ What a delightful reply ! Yes - of course ! Mulch available upon request. Shipping and handling extra ! Ohhhhhhh ... you're raking .... ALRIGHT ! ! ! ! Love you to pieces !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This was so good, it's a life in poem. I'll ride the rainbow for a while with this in my head. Thanks just lovely |
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dr.sugar New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 3memphis, Tn |
your poem reminds me of the nights i spend thinking of the past things i've done, regretting my losses and wishing i could have changed certain things. but, like you said in your poem, "Don't let the sun catch you crying For the day should bring you glee." thanks for the inspirational thoughts. they bring a new "light" into my mind. dr.sugar dr.sugar |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Thank you so much. I like the very idea of 'riding the rainbow'. Dr.Sugar~ I'm sure we all know those nights of re-thinking .. but the sun will bring us a new day to paint. *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ You pen speaks volumes to my heart my friend. This was simply amazing. Each and every line is just perfect!!! There is a light at the end of the tunnel. I know it in my heart. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Marge! And your rhyming poems are always a special treat for me! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Oh,Marge, your talents never cease to amaze me..Im glad you are willing to share your poetry tree or this envious jealous creeper will suffocate you to pieces Gosh,im so bad!!LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf, my friend~ Yes, the light is there, hon. You will get there to be bathed in it's warmth. Thank you. Denise~ Oh, thank you. I really appreciate that so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ You imp ! Sneaking up on me like that ! Now - it's YOUR turn to rake ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah Marge, I can relate to this well. I hope that nothing in the universe sees you cry. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge I hope the warmth of your musings and your soul help. Lovely piece Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful poem Marge. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful, Marge! LIz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoveBug~ Honey, we all have tears to shed - just need to make sure we don't drown in them. A friend needed to know that things will be brighter ... I hope it helped. Tracie~ Thank you. I hope so too. BrianM~ Thank you for your comments. Elizabeth~ Thank ya', darlin'! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful Marge, well done as usual! I remember an old Gerry And The Pacemakers song....Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying... What a beautiful approach to life...Thanks Marge!! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Marge, it's always a pleasure. May the sun forever find you smiling! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ YES ! 1964 hit ! I didn't think of it when this poem came to mind, but others did ... Thank you for the sweet reply. Trew~ I do so appreciate your comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Don't know how I missed this one Marge, but it definately deserves a bump to the top. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ I do love knowing that you find me ! Having a great cup of that 'fellow-insomniac' coffee ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge-I am slowly finding the sun thanks to poems like these and a special friend or two. Enjoyed it alot and it gives hope and promise. Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ May the sun catch you in her soft array - with a multitude of friends along the way. *HUGS* Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
When shadows of the night surround and heartache comes again to call Softly into a satin pillow your tears begin to fall .... Don't let the sun catch you crying For the day should bring you glee When shadows of the new night come I trust you'll think of me .... ...Wonderful poetry Marge, enjoyed the early rays from the sun this morning... regards sudhir |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
Wow that's a great poem, people just ignore mine, I guess it's because I'm just a kid (17) I wish I could get people to read mine like they do yours, anyways it's an awesome poem and you emailed my mom the re-written form of her poem that she wrote so it rhymed (Paula Finn) and again it's a great poem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Thank you for the warm and wonderful reply. The sun is up here also and the sky is lit with the crimson gold of the morning. Kyle~ Thank you for your reply. I replied to your 'Candle In The Window' so I know you're not being ignored ! Trust me ... I read the ALL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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