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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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a worked on repost Travel Intrigue The intrigue of pictorials, Cinderella attire Offered in subliminal form Desire set on fire. Transference lulls a glitzy sleep. Moonlit figures dance ballet. Tittering wink and champagne drink, Lures you into interplay. Veiled within surreptitiousness, Flirtatious syrupy water. Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp, Makes for a heady mortar. Vivacious waiting elegance. Promised tete-a-tete so sweet, Page and page of dream on dream, Harvesting your thoughts' complete. To guest or not to guest the theme. There is no question but a scheme. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Been reading Isabel's travel broshures again, Sy?  Enjoy the poem...... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those brochures promise so much, don't they? Advertising marketing at its best! I remember the original. I don't know exactly what you changed but this one does seem to have more 'kick' to it. Well written, as always, Sy! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Yes I confess. Thanks for the read. Denise, Thank you for the nice coment. *L* |
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