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Remember Me
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Remember Me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Remember me The taste of your tongue as it crosses your lips The texture I feel while holding your hips The wonder of what the future will bring The songs my heart no longer will sing The sound of your voice as I wake up each day The use of the words that I love you to say The fear that I have of the change soon to come Am I loosing my way, my life on the run? The look in your eyes as you ask me for help That innermost beauty you carry yourself No longer controlled by my charm, wit or style No way to get to you with my boyish smile. You know all my faults I’ve revealed my small lies I sit here in wake Believe me I’ve tried To show you the light That I’ve always seen The love that I give Is the love that you need Support and respect Secured in my heart You know where I am Remember to start To love me again. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
The passion you ignited from start of verse The love in heart you've expressed so well Very sweet poem 'Spiked'  Coco |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you very much coco |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Wonderful read. Thanks for sharing. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Spiked~ this is beautiful and heartfelt. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Spiked, Beautiful, absolutely beatiful great piece |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
worry not, Rich---you're kind of hard to forget... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Jan, Sea ,Martini and Serenity. |
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Janelle New Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1 |
I honestly think that you have talent. The words, I could feel, were from the heart. If only some of us could be so lucky as to receive a poem or hear those words from the men we are with. Thank you! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
sigh...spiked very romantic a lovely poem, well written. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank You Janelle sometimes People see things better from the outside looking in. Thank you Brian Easy when you write from inside Rich |
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Impassionata Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 26Alberta,Canada |
*Spiked*......so beautiful and touching your words...would that my man would say things like that to me. Love this poem |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I do so hope you are always remembered!! Beautiful words!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Bridgette and impassionata |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great expressions Spiked. You have captured the intimate familiarity that so many come to know and love. I hope the last line works out for the character in the poem. Great read! |
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