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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-15 07:39 PM

    Sometimes late at night, when the wind is
                  blowing..
    and the cold rain keeps pouring from the
                    sky..
    It warms my heart to know, that what we have
                  is growing..
    My love for you could light the darkest
                    night....

    Words could never say how much I love you..
    Money couldn't buy the way I feel..
    Time can only make us better lovers..
    Nothing in my life has been so real....

    I will never know--just how I got so
                  lucky..
    My life had been so empty for so
                  long..
    I remember the first time--you told me
                  that you loved me..
    You did it with a guitar and a
                  song....

    So, maybe words can say how much I love you..
    These words have been inside me all along..
    It's all I have to give, but as long as we
                  both live..
    You'll have my love forever in this poem....

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Your words become music to my soul......

[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-15-2000).]

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2000-07-15 09:53 PM

Sunny, this poem is extremely touching in its sincerity....

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-07-15 09:58 PM

Sunny,

This was very heartfelt and beautiful. Whatever you have to give will be enough. Wonderful words you have spoken and you are right, the poem will last forever.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-07-15 10:06 PM

Almost made me want to cry.
The last line..."You'll have my love forever in this poem"...just jump off the page with love and sincerity...James

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2000-07-15 10:42 PM

Let me simply say that as I read,my heart truly swelled with happiness for the person in this poem.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2000-07-15 11:20 PM

To Balladeer, Lone Wolf, James, & Jamie.....

   I do appreciate your input on this poem.
   I wrote it from a heart that was full and
   when I look back on it, I know I was
   blessed with a special love.

             Thank all of you......
                 you're all so special.....

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2000-07-15 11:28 PM

this poem is so full of promise just like its author's penname

if this is personal,then i am truly glad that you have found your soulmate

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2000-07-16 12:56 PM

Sunny girl they just keep getting better and better...I really like this one

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