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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You slip quietly in and out of my life. Stealing moments of passion of pleasure. Leaving me breathless, leaving me wanting Things I cant have. Its not too late to stop the madness Its not too late to change my mind. Its not too late to stop the heartache Its not too late to let you go. Spending hours simply talking little moments of your day. Til the passion heats between us And once again we love the hours away. Its not too late to stop the madness. Its not too late to change my mind. Its not too late to stop this heartache. Its not too late to say goodbye. So now i sit here dreaming Waiting for our time to come. Knowing its too late to change this. Knowing now my heart is gone. Its too late to stop the madness Its too late to change my mind Its too late to stop the heartache Its too late to say goodbye. [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It sure seems that way, sometimes, Paula. Nicely expressed. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
cant fight fate  not madness...INTENSITY... I call it crazy from the heat.. it will make ya MAD CRAZY tho ... oh how well I know ... felt your frustration and anticipation in this one Paula... its called sweet surrender jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula..... This one hits home, and that's good! It's comforting to know someone else has felt that frustration.... torn between ending it, and anticipation of the next meeting. Thank you for this, it's great....... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Elizabeth...some things you just cant seem to let go of easily. JM...surrender? im not ready to surrender yet sunny1...you and I just seem to think so much alike...Im glad I seem to write to you... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
loved the wonderful flow of this one...keep up the good work loved it |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very nicely penned ... I can picture this as a song ... flows so easily  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
wayoutwalt...thank you Rex Allen...actually it is a song |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
How that too late suddenly appears is a mystery in itself but it happens........Well written Paula..... |
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