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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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You took my heart without asking and I never heard you sneak in You took it, then left me with all these emotions that keep flowing out of my pen....... You left your mark on my pillow But nary a print can I find You stood there, so quiet, Then reached deep inside me To wander around in my mind....... I know I'm alone in the shadows But my dreams invited you in They opened the door, Then they let you explore all the secrets where no one has been.. You took my heart without asking But you left me love in it's place So, I'll give you the heart that was broken so badley For the smile you put back on my face... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't that just like a fellow, to burgle his way on in... good stuff here... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Karilea.... Yep.....they have a way of just sneaking up on you!! But that's what makes the game so much fun to play!!!!!! Thankyou...... (I think I see what you meant by 'don't work at your poetry...it will work for you'.....) Good advice and I will learn from you! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
This is lovely! Very sweet read!  magnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Always comes when you least expects it doesn't it? Wonderful poem here Sunny!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
I'm a sucker for love poems (can you tell?). I liked this one a lot! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ This one seemed to flow with ease. Must be your heart talking ... 'Just Listen' ! 'You left your mark on my pillow But nary a print can I find You stood there, so quiet, Then reached deep inside me To wander around in my mind.......' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Criminal!!! He should get LIFE.....with you! Terrific poem.....  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
MagnoliaBlue.... Even a burgler has a sweet side! Thank you....... LW..... A 'Lone Wolf' knows all about quiet stealth!! (we have wolves here in Alaska!!) Thank you...... Trew..... I can tell you like love poems, and I really enjoy what you write........Thank you....... Marge..... Yes, I think it was my heart... I'm trying to listen more often! Thank you for reading....... Balladeer.. Maybe in the next life!!!! Once again, thank you... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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