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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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wish she knew how much I loved her how much I cared wish she could have seen past the mirrors the smoke I blew at her why couldn't I show my love how come I hid it from her why was I so afraid what did I have to fear she use count on me but now to her I don't even count maybe I feared getting hurt ironicly, the regret hurts more than any person could ever hurt me I guess you live and learn but I feel I may have missed my chance to live |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is good free verse, asks a lot of questions, even criticizes the person for his actions up front...I like this. Welcome to Passions - Enjoy your stay! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you sunshine that really does mean alot to me. I'm to this poetry thing but it's a good theropy for me and it's twice as good to know somebody else can enjoy it. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
IsGona....... I think this is truly a poem with unusual insight!! You made me see that the worst pain in a relationship is not really from the other person, it comes from beating ourselves up over what we 'should have done'. That's a hard lesson to learn...... Thankyou for writing this... it helped me think!! My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Sunshine~ again thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. You really understood what I was trying to say here. That means something thatnks again IsGona |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Maybe I feared getting hurt... ironicly, the regret hurts more than any person could ever hurt me." Yes I have experienced this regret. Excellent writing. James |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
James, Glad you enjoyed my poem. And I'm sorry you had to experience this type of regret 'cause I know how much it hurts but I do believe it taught me alot. Can't be afraid to open my heart any more. Thanks for your nice comments, IsGona |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
This poem has been posted in multiple forums. If you'd like to reply to it, please do in the Teen forum. |
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