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Lovesong. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Lovesong Your words tell the story of my life Your rhythm beats with the pulse of my heart Your melody sings of a love not yet found Lovesong You have sung through me since my birth You trained my voice to best sing your soul You gave to me the secret of your voice Lovesong I am your singer, inspire me Give my voice power and help me to be your soul Singing always from my heart -------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Sven ... when i learn how to place words like you, then maybe (just maybe) i'll start to believe poetry is what i should be writing ... beautiful. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hear all of the violins... their music is the soul and my heart is now whole... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
My eyes drank this in, with it's melodic, soft and tender words ... beautiful Sven! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven........ I always look forward to reading your work, and this one satisfies like the sweetest melody.......... Just beautiful..... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ You drew the bow across my heart. Do you realize how much we enjoy your poetry ? I hope you do.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Being new here, this is the first poem of yours I've read, and must I look forward to your next post. You did a nice job with this poem. Someday I will learn to right that good. ~IsGona~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I think I have run out of words to describe your poetry Sven. You always write such heartfelt words, and so beautifully too. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . MA, thank you. . . I am quite humbled by your words. . . I just write what I feel. . . Sunshine, you always know just what to say. . . thank you. . . Kit, thank you my friend. . . I've always had a thing for love songs. . . Sunny1, thank you. . . I am glad that you enjoyed. . . Marge, that bow draws across my own heart daily. . . and yes, my friend, I do know how much my poetry is enjoyed by the people of Passions, and it amazes me every day. . . Thank you all. . . IsGona, thank you and again welcome. . . I am again humbled by your words. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Your song is enchanting my friend. This really was beautiful. Nice writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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