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I want to learn about you
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I want to learn about you |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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I want to get to know you I want to learn about you I want to feel you watching me as I cross the floor I want to hear you laugh I want to see you cry I want to see right through your shy blue eyes I want to get to know you Not like any other I want to learn about you I want to know what makes you smile I want to find the time to talk a while I want to get to know you I want to learn about you I want to hear you sigh I want to see the sunrise in your eyes I want to get to know you I want to learn about you I want to know your dreams I want to hear you fears I want to be part of your fantasy I want to get to know you I want learn about you so quiet and shy I believe you and I could fly I want to get to know you I want to learn about you I want to see inside your heart I want to look into your soul maybe it's you that could make me whole I want to learn about you I want to get to know you got to get you away from here then maybe we could start to share I want to get to know you I want to learn about you never hurt you never desert you I want to learn about you I want to know whats on your mind I believe you may be one of a kind I want to learn about you Julie :) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Oh yes! I can so relate to this one. I think you get the feelings across perfectly, thankyou for sharing this. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Julie...... As far as I'm concerned, your computer can glitch as many times as it wants to with works like this!!!! I like the sentiment here..... seems like nobody has time to get to know anybody, anymore. So.......great job, great read!! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Very nice JA... just lay it out there  perfectly expressed sentiments spoken sincerely and softly..like a whisper you and I seem to be on the same wavelength poetically once again. later gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JA, Wonderful writing here with a great message. I hope you get the chance and take your time and really get to know the object of your affection. This was great. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good thoughts, Julie. Too bad more people don't feel that way....  |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Mmmm. Falling in love and wanting to get to know every little thing about them, every intimate detail. You said it beautifully! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all so much for your replys..... You are all so kind.....and yes I DO want to get to know him...even if that is all it is just knowing him....but we work together in a night club so we really don't have any time and he lives an hour away......darn the luck!!! Well we shall see...but I am sure you will be reading more about him!!! Thank you again for reading!!! Julie :) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
'only an hour away' that's almost forever lovely poem JulieAnn  |
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