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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-16 02:58 AM



I awake...laying in your arms,
I feel safe,
No worries to calm.

You kiss my cheek,
And wink at me,
Lifes no longer bleak,
It what it should be.

We talk of the previous
night,
I cant take away my stare,
I hold you tight,
You notice my glare.

But nothing needs to be
said,
You know how I feel,
I lay in the bed,
And it all seems real.

You have put a new faith
in me,
That life can be good,
I never took the time to
see,
Like the way I should.

Now that you know whats in
my heart,
Share your thoughts,
Lets make a new start.

I know your afraid of
what could be done,
Just let go,
And makes us one.

Dont say "nothing ventured"
"nothing gained" again to me,
Open your eyes and tell me
what you see.

I dont want to go,
Without a thought,
You may teach,
You may be taught.

Please just give me a
try,
If you dont you'll
always wonder why.

© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-07-16 03:05 AM


wonderful thoughts here
Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
2 posted 2000-07-16 03:11 AM


~I wrote this poem for someone i care about (you know who you are)...and now that you know what I feel...and you have read it too...are you going to make my dreams come true?....I dont want to own you...I only want to hold a small place in your heart...~

Beth

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-07-16 03:40 AM


Beth
I really liked what was being said here.
Wonderful piece...loved the read
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
4 posted 2000-07-16 04:16 AM


~Paula, thanks for your reply...Im glad you liked it~

~Tracie...What a nice response..thankyou..I appreciate it~

Blessed Be,
Beth

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