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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Someone told me that this death that is my heart would ease. My battered soul asked when but the only response I got was SOMEDAY... They told me someday someone would come along and I'd be happy again. Then I met you and I thought oh how right they were. You, with your laughing eyes and gentle touch. And I dreamed once again of a life of love and hope and joy. And so I asked you when our new life would begin. You told me SOMEDAY |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Paula, A stinging portrait of a love's uncertainty towards commitment ... beautiful ... (love your stuff too)< !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A.M. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Soon I hope. Sometimes love can be slowed doen from past hurts but if it is real it will get there. PATIENCE!!( I know that you hate that word) Loved the write and the flow. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MA...sometimes committment leaves you guessing Mark...patience I know patience...and we both know its real. never say never |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ such a longing in this....I hope your someday comes very soon  if not maybe fate has something else in store for you, ya just never know. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Tracie...fate has touched me and I am following my dream...there are just rough spots along the way never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I lack in Patience and "someday's" are evil little words.....lol, This is a great piece Paula...and "they" say that the harder it is to get.......the sweeter it is, Hope "they" are right for you |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The day will come when you finally get that which you desire. . . it's just not time yet. . . and it's good that you know that. . . Excellent poem Paula!!! Shows that there's always a someday. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Paula, waiting is a cruel word - believe me I know! Lol...good that you can accept it as part of life though - and this is a cool poem... K |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
You've been peeking into my heart right?  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Butterflies....I am being taught patience and I dont like it at all...lol Sven...yes I do know and I also know someday will come. Severn...thank you and sometimes cruel teaches just as much as kindness. Jeffrey...every chance I get never say never |
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