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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The light in your eyes when I walk through the door Makes the hardest day just fade away Your sweetest kiss upon my cheek Wet and warm and full of love for me. Your whole body radiates the joy of seeing me once again. And I know I have found a companion for life. You are a friend who doesnt judge A gift that I cherish. My man?....no my dog... SURPRISE... ....sorry folks...some days its just these friends that make the day go away so I wanted to say thanks in a special way. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I thought it might be about your dog when I read..."your whole body radiates"!!! This was great....... sparkling with humor!! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ LOL ! I should have recognized the 'wag' !  My pups sure welcome me home with delight ! I know just what you mean ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love it, and I know what you mean. They are always there for you regardless....... God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
no other body would treat me so when it's to you and home I go dog's'll do it, won't they!? Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny1...aawww now it could have been my guy LMAO. Marge...I just couldnt resist...all these beautiful love poems and then theres this... EagleOne...no questions asked...unconditional love...what more can you ask? Sunshine...well I have four and the greeting i get is awesome... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
That is it!! from now on I check the ending first....rofl cute Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula I loved that ending....wheres that Rex I have a feeling he would just love this one too  great poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie..NO NO no fair peeking Tracie...its the surprise...gotta have fun never say never |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
awwww that was so cool, and cute! I wasn't expecting the ending to be honest Too CoolSauni Sauni :) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I have to admit, you got me too LMAO |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
very cute...I was anticipating another ending... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Saunni...well it is called surprise Jeffrey...teehee thats the fun of it MMoonchild...thanks it was fun never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I loved this Paula!!! A suprise at the end is always the best!! |
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