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Kevin
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0 posted 2000-07-14 02:08 PM


Close your eyes and slip away
Leave this world behind again
Tomorrow is another day
And what a day today has been
May your dreams be sweet tonight
For morning comes so very soon
And know I’m here ‘mongst silver light
To guard you ‘neath the midnight moon




[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 07-14-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-14 02:48 PM


Kevin~
You're such a cutie pie ...
I'm not only voting .....
I'm *swooning* !  

Ron, can we have a centerfold ?
PLEASE !  


Oh ... lest I forget ....
I love the moonlight and this poem shines !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cuddlez
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2 posted 2000-07-14 03:51 PM


Why cant I have someone to guard me and guide me? Hehehe. Nice poem...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-07-14 04:23 PM


Oh Kevin.......

     This is enough to make a girl swoon!!

       P.S. I'm with Marge on the
            centerfold idea!!!!!!!


My heart is an open book
....take a look....


Kevin
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4 posted 2000-07-14 07:36 PM


Now guys, I swore I would never pose AGAIN

and If swooning is a good thing, hehe than swoon on.

Cuddelz, maybe someone is guarding you as we speak and you dont know it, thats how it was with me for a while.

Thanks guys

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2000-07-14 08:01 PM


i like this lil poem yuh stick it in the book or else i say
Marina
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6 posted 2000-07-14 09:39 PM


Fantasic writing my friend!  I You are wise beyond years.

My vote for sure!!!

Marina


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7 posted 2000-07-14 10:39 PM


Incredibly gorgeous...I'm swooning too my friend....Keep up the great work, I'm voting!  

*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~

Kevin
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8 posted 2000-07-16 12:13 PM


Walt, if it were in my hands =) i would

Mar, if I had a nickle for every time i heard that, thanks for your kind words

Alwye, good to hear from you =) Hope all is well your way

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