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Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
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0 posted 2000-07-14 11:45 AM


Earth's baby girl,
cries in cosmic rain fall.
Her purity is struck,
by a thundering crash
of an asteroid storm.
Her analysis of the
continual darkness
is covered by a blanket of insecurity.
Harmony is not found with
The Mercury Queen...
Shadows paint skems of cellestial background and a stage of dimmed stars.
Survival is not a strength, nor is it a choice.
Predictions are now false, and children weep as the earth's baby girl has endured too many rain drops that create a stream of energetic, yet, frightened emotions.
Earth's baby girl's got a secret.
She hides it so well.
Behind the Mercury Queen lies the instinctive ground.
In depth thoughts sketch a lonely figure of Earth's Baby Girl, standing in cosmic rainfall, awaiting another asteroid storm.

© Copyright 2000 Melissa - All Rights Reserved
Katrina Katrina
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since 2000-07-06
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1 posted 2000-07-14 12:03 PM


Great Work Blondie!  
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-14 12:13 PM


Really beautiful.  Keep em coming.
Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
Posts 307
Ohio
3 posted 2000-07-14 02:23 PM


Thanks guys
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