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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-07-08 02:11 PM


room spinning
dizzy
out of control
sorry but you must go
we'll pick up where
we left off
on another night
too much rumpleminz
too much fun
don't want to do anything
that can't be undone
just talk with me a while
if you will
listening intently
making me believe
your hanging on
every word I say
do I bore you?
am i a mess?
sorry we had to
meet this way
had to get out
should have stayed in
repenting yet another sin
fearing you'll forget my name
living in the limelight
your little piece of fame
of all the girls there that night
you could have had your pick
it was me walking to your truck
maybe it was just dumb luck
we talked about everything
under the moon
the night was ending
way too soon
please tell me I didn't
scare you away
just for a while be my friend
don't let our first night
be the end.....< !signature-->

Julie  




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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-08 02:44 PM


could also call this one "racing mind".
Lots of thoughts going on in this one.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2000-07-08 02:47 PM


first night jitters every woman will relate to this Julie
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-07-08 04:51 PM


Reminds me of the way I feel...I just want to connect and have her accept me...I don't want to move to fast...or go past a friendship...I want to feel comfortable with her...I don't want to do anything I will regret...let it just be the night that we met....and perhaps more will come later..long phone calls...happiness...what is the rush...James
JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
4 posted 2000-07-08 05:44 PM


Liked the title you picked Jamie.....glad you read it thanks for the reply  

Paula....Thank you for the kind reply...

James.....I know how you feel.....that is exactly the point I was trying to get across you "read" me well!!  

Julie :)



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-07-09 03:07 AM


James said it so well I have to agree with him. Slow and sure is the only way to be.

great read -- loved all the thoughts flowing down the page

Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
6 posted 2000-07-14 01:17 AM


Awesome poem. Im sure he had a good reason he picked you over the others... How goes it in the relationship?


Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
7 posted 2000-07-14 02:47 PM


Thank you all for your replys...

Cuddlez~~~the relationship???? Well ok I guess I am just not ready to call it a relationship.....

Julie :)



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