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| Open Poetry #8 |
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Wild Night...... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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room spinning dizzy out of control sorry but you must go we'll pick up where we left off on another night too much rumpleminz too much fun don't want to do anything that can't be undone just talk with me a while if you will listening intently making me believe your hanging on every word I say do I bore you? am i a mess? sorry we had to meet this way had to get out should have stayed in repenting yet another sin fearing you'll forget my name living in the limelight your little piece of fame of all the girls there that night you could have had your pick it was me walking to your truck maybe it was just dumb luck we talked about everything under the moon the night was ending way too soon please tell me I didn't scare you away just for a while be my friend don't let our first night be the end.....< !signature--> Julie  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-08-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
could also call this one "racing mind". Lots of thoughts going on in this one. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
first night jitters every woman will relate to this Julie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of the way I feel...I just want to connect and have her accept me...I don't want to move to fast...or go past a friendship...I want to feel comfortable with her...I don't want to do anything I will regret...let it just be the night that we met....and perhaps more will come later..long phone calls...happiness...what is the rush...James |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Liked the title you picked Jamie.....glad you read it thanks for the reply  Paula....Thank you for the kind reply... James.....I know how you feel.....that is exactly the point I was trying to get across you "read" me well!! Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
James said it so well I have to agree with him. Slow and sure is the only way to be. great read -- loved all the thoughts flowing down the page |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Awesome poem. Im sure he had a good reason he picked you over the others... How goes it in the relationship? Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all for your replys... Cuddlez~~~the relationship???? Well ok I guess I am just not ready to call it a relationship..... Julie :) |
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