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Open Poetry #8

Hope

deb
Junior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 44
Reading, Pa., USA

0 posted 2000-07-13 10:47 PM

My mind gets the best of me
Order is not a characteristic
Just thoughts of you rising to the moment

I see you and we make eye contact
There is no hesitation as you draw me close to you
Your heart beats through me

I thought heaven did not exist....

I suck the breath from your soul
It engulfs me until I feel whole
And for a short time I feel alive

I thought heaven was for eternity....

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2000-07-14 12:43 PM

Deb, I like the thoughts you portray here very much. . .suck the breath from your soul..very nicely said.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2000-07-14 12:47 PM

Very nice....I like the whole concept here.

Sauni

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-07-14 09:26 AM

Amazing how we can survie through just the briefest of moments. Good read and I liked the though process.

deb
Junior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 44
Reading, Pa., USA

4 posted 2000-07-14 09:33 AM

Thanks for the replies guys! This is my second peom I posted and I was a bit apprehensive about "putting it out there."Thanks for the confidence!

Deb

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