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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Arrayed in white, she's standing there. She's waiting for her love to come. The vows were set for ten o'clock and it is now a half past one. All of the guests have gone away. She told the pianist to go. Still she stands with her bouquet knowing not what keeps him so. The church is quiet as she waits. At the alter, she stands alone. Sadness starts to cloud the eyes where once the light of love had shone. She does not know where he could be. What could make the groom so late? He should arrive at any time so she shall simply stand and wait. Arrayed in white, she's standing there. She's waiting for her love to come. The vows were set for ten o'clock and it is now a half past one. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh my! I sincerely hope that this is not a true life experience... I cannot even imagine the pain of such. Beautifully written and expressed.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ You bring the tissues ? Makes me all misty-eyed. I'm saddened to think that it has happened to someone. I hope you'll enjoy my reply ... will post shortly - entitled 'Left At The Church'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
What a beautiful poem on such a dreadful topic. You conveyed the scene perfectly. The lump is still in my throat. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful writing, Tennessee. i'm sure this could never happen to you...... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Mark -- You are such a sweet man! It is not true to life...at least not my life. I am certain it would be a horrid experience. Marge -- Well, what can I say my poetic pal! Once again your responding poem outshines the one which inspired it. I have come to cherish your responses to my work.  Trew -- Thank you so much for your kind response! I think it's a powerful thing when a poet can convey such emotion to the reader. Balladeer -- Happen to me?? No, my 'deer, one look into these baby blues and a man could never willingly walk away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ You're just a sweetie ! What fun we have here ! I'm glad you enjoyed mine, as I sure enjoyed yours. GO TEAM GO ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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