Open Poetry #8 |
Complete Because Of You |
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Complete Because Of You I have fists that hold much anger, but can make the sweetest of bread. I have feet that run in fear of this world, but can dance till day break in your arms. My eyes have seen much injustice, but hold visions of our love opened or closed. My nose has smelled of the most beautiful roses, yet does not snub your faults. Time is oh so hard to find in your behalf, because duty calls always in different directions. Money never can be for what we desire, for to survive this system takes every penny that comes across the threshold. This heart of mine is tired oh so tired of such sorrow and pain inflicted, but will never skip a beat for you my love. My own tong can produce much upheaval, but I only speak of you admirable. My soul has seen the ravages of man, felt his sting and memorized every lie, but has the wisdom to discern the presents of true love. My life has some times been in question, but never with you. I guess you could say I have had it all good, bad, unpleasant to divine, but I can now say I am complete and it’s because of you. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, If it seems like I have not been around its because I have been trying to read and reply to as many book subs as I can, I will never leave my wonderful family here. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hello, Sweet Cerenity~ This is quite an awesome piece. You have grown so much in your poetry. You are such a gentle soul ... always willing to learn and to share. Love and *HUGS*. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So very nice to know that you are still around. I love the style of this work and the sheer beauty encased within was well worth waiting for. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree, Cerenity. you are certainly complete. Excellent writing..... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dear sweet friends, Thank you so much for the kind words, Question is the word (admirable) the right version of that word to use???? Love, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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