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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-07-13 07:36 PM



Complete Because Of You


I have fists that hold much anger,
but can make the sweetest of bread.
I have feet that run in fear of this
world, but can dance  till day
break in your arms.

My eyes have seen much injustice,
but hold visions of our love opened
or closed. My nose has smelled
of the most beautiful roses,
yet does not snub
your faults.

Time is oh so hard to find in your
behalf, because duty calls always in
different directions. Money never
can be for what we desire, for to
survive this system takes every
penny that comes across
the threshold.  

This heart of mine is tired oh so tired
of such sorrow and pain inflicted, but
will never skip a beat for you my love.
My own tong can produce much
upheaval, but I only speak
of you admirable.

My soul has seen the ravages of man,
felt his sting and memorized every
lie, but has the wisdom to discern
the presents of true love. My life
has some times been in
question, but never
with you.

I guess you could say I have had
it all good, bad, unpleasant to
divine, but I can now say I
am  complete and it’s
because of
you.


By, Cerenity




"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Cerenity
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1 posted 2000-07-13 07:38 PM


Hi Everyone,

If it seems like I have not been around its because I have been trying to read and reply to as many book subs as I can, I will never leave my wonderful family here.

Love,  Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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2 posted 2000-07-13 08:12 PM


Hello, Sweet Cerenity~
This is quite an awesome piece.
You have grown so much in your poetry.

You are such a gentle soul ... always
willing to learn and to share.
Love and *HUGS*.
~*Marge*~


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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-07-13 08:40 PM


So very nice to know that you are still around.  I love the style of this work and the sheer beauty encased within was well worth waiting for.  
Balladeer
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4 posted 2000-07-13 08:51 PM


I agree, Cerenity. you are certainly complete. Excellent writing.....
Cerenity
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5 posted 2000-07-13 09:02 PM


Hi Dear sweet friends,

Thank you so much for the kind words, Question is the word (admirable) the right version of that word to use????

Love, Cerenity


[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 07-13-2000).]

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