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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-12 08:32 PM


Yes yes I know, I've written a song.  Something just came out of me with this one.

Her hair flows
Over her eyes
Hiding pasts that become
To hard to disguise
Her heaven is gone away
As she lives her lonely days.

The world that
Wants to sting
To take back
Her heartfelt dreams
Only her love is her stone
Cast in heavens heart, she goes on.

So at night
She presses on
Her dreams
Becoming true
One more night with the one she loves
The one whos miles from home.
          (Chorus)
           Raise your eyes
           Hopeful one
           See the stars
           That share your thoughts
           Look upon your
           Heavens heart
           Raise your soul
           Hopeful one

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-07-12 08:53 PM


I really like this! Would love to hear it with a melody!
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-12 08:59 PM


OH sing it baby...LOL
great work here...
get out your GEEETAR  
later-rock-n-roll gator
jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you
MB20

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