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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Yes yes I know, I've written a song. Something just came out of me with this one. Her hair flows Over her eyes Hiding pasts that become To hard to disguise Her heaven is gone away As she lives her lonely days. The world that Wants to sting To take back Her heartfelt dreams Only her love is her stone Cast in heavens heart, she goes on. So at night She presses on Her dreams Becoming true One more night with the one she loves The one whos miles from home. (Chorus) Raise your eyes Hopeful one See the stars That share your thoughts Look upon your Heavens heart Raise your soul Hopeful one |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I really like this! Would love to hear it with a melody! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH sing it baby...LOL great work here... get out your GEEETAR  later-rock-n-roll gator jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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