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Open Poetry #8

Early Morning Sunlight

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

0 posted 2000-07-10 12:16 PM

The early morning sunlight,
shines through my window.
Bringing life to a new day,
putting light on my midnight fears.

The early morning sunlight,
glides across the floor.
Playing songs for the dancing dust,
and shinning through my waking doubts.

The early morning sunlight,
slowly wakes the world.
Bathing the earth in fluid gold,
and adding magic to my dreams.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-07-10 12:22 PM

Outstanding.
I am reminded of the little girl in the comic strip who chased the sunbeam around the room.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-07-10 03:46 PM

quote:
The early morning sunlight,
glides across the floor.
Playing songs for the dancing dust,
and shining through my waking doubts.

...dust motes dance upon her beam
vision of fairy's dance to a rondo
the sun she sparks a flame inside
she is far more complex than she seems

good job, JP!

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-07-12 08:20 PM

JP~
The imagery just oozes through this piece.
Very well done.

'The early morning sunlight,
slowly wakes the world.
Bathing the earth in fluid gold,
and adding magic to my dreams.'

Doesn't get much prettier than this !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Adrienne
Junior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 20
California

4 posted 2000-07-12 08:56 PM

AAaah, JP, I can feel the warmth even as I write. Brings a smile to my lips....

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