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Plea for Alchemy
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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and so a cup of herbal tea a sympathetic hug for me... every sound is twice as proud, this day the silence whispers loud. Even here cocooned within stalwart I, defend my ground. I need a friend within my skin-- I yearn to shed this shroud. and so again, here it comes... another steamy July sun... winking one angry eye (it's gonna shine until you fry...) no sympathy-- I do not plead. no sympathy-- I have no need. rain on my soul, plant you seeds... spin me tales of legend old, touch me, Midas, make me gold, a chalice strong enough to hold all eternity... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
serenity, no sympathy-- I do not plead. no sympathy-- I have no need. rain on my soul, plant you seeds... spin me tales of legend old, touch me, Midas, make me gold, a chalice strong enough to hold all eternity... a wonderful poem, I am left in silent awe. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a sympathetic hug for me... every sound is twice as proud, this day the silence whispers loud. Even here cocooned within stalwart I, defend my ground. I need a friend within my skin-- I yearn to shed this shroud. ---------------- rain on my soul, plant you seeds... spin me tales of legend old, touch me, Midas, make me gold, a chalice strong enough to hold all eternity... ----------- i repeat...your so cool it hurts and your muse aint half bad either  gotta get me some of that tea... does it come in raspberry (hehe) me thinks that"mardi gras" heat is getting to ya... OH HOW I KNOW...*sigh* (oh how i miss it) and by the way... tis nothing wrong with the twin beneath thy skin ... *kiss kiss* me loves ya I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Serenity  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exceptional Work! I have no need. rain on my soul, plant you seeds... spin me tales of legend old, touch me, Midas, make me gold, a chalice strong enough to hold all eternity... regards to you serenity, sudhir. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--Wow--this is excellent...the title caught me and the poem is so strong. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Brian-------I am in awe of your awe. I really appreciate you read my work...thanks. Jm----------so cool it hurts, so hot I'm melting,and there ain't no cure for the summertime blues...thanks me lovely, for being there for me while I go through this "thing"--whatever the hell it is...you are truly a good friend. Dark Angel--thanks for being so supportive and sweet...it's greatly appreciated. Sudhir------I knew that you would understand this one--I just KNEW--so thank you for your kind regards. Martie------I am really a big fan of yours, so your comments mean a great deal to me...thanks...I thought this one had crawled under the porch and died... Thanks to all... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, may your plea not fall on deaf ears. . . Superb my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Jeez, S'en. I'm gone just a little bitty while, and you're already falling apart on me! J/k. I love your poems about such aching need. God, that line about Midas, to turn you into a chalice to hold all of eternity ... damn, this needs to be published!(hugs) Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you Sven, me lovely friend... and Mike--ye made me blush...not easy either--sorry we lost contact--do tell me yer puter did not die...e me soon--love to you...and hugs for your pc... |
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