Open Poetry #8 |
Sing of your Glory Days |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sing of your Glory Days Sing of your glory days, unfullfilled dreams Tell tales of ventures and opportune schemes Then sit at the table surrounded by love This is truly what you should be proudest of Go to the picnic and brag of your past Great things that happened and went by too fast Then grab your young child and go for a swim The true life your living is really in him Don’t get caught up in fantasies, it is too late Don’t think of what may or may not be your fate The present is full of more dreams than before And they all seem to gather at your kitchen door The riches you wished for are all within sight Sitting around the dinner table tonight They bring you such pleasure without any schemes And they are the answers to all of your dreams Hang on to each moment without one regret Your child’s tender years you will never forget The time that you’ve struggled, don’t ever condemn The best part of your life are these moments with them Keep your priorities ever in sight Then give each one a kiss and tell them good night Elizabeth Santos |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Liz, Such wonderful sentiments expressed... I wonder where you get the constant energy to come up with such beauties.... In amazement of your persona, I offer you my regards, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Wonderful, and I wonder the same thing. Love sy |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Loads of wisdom in this work ... My kinda' poem ... Nice read ... Love your work ... (Would have voted for this one to go in the book). [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
If we could all just remember the lessons of your work. I'm adding it to my Library and will take it out each time I get off track. Thank you for sharing, your work here is truly a gift. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I have said exactly the same thing about the last 4 or 5 may be more of your poems I have read, and this is no different a truly professional work of art . Your biggest fan . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
God how I do love this one. It is filled with an overflow of wisdom and love. I too am adding it to my file. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
There you go again, writing exquisite verse! |
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