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Close Your Eyes ... Come to Me
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Close Your Eyes ... Come to Me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Close your eyes and come to me, < !signature-->this between us is meant to be. Dream this dream that we both share, take my hand ... take me there. Close your eyes and breathe me in, feel my touch ... this innocent sin. See the flame of candles glowing, surrender to these passions flowing. Close your eyes and lift up to me, Body and Soul, Spirit free, Envision all of this fantasy's pleasures, moments of elation ... ours to treasure. Close your eyes and lay your body down, in my essence ... sweetly drown. Whisper your secrets ... say my name, in these moments, hearts know no shame. Close your eyes, and feel my embrace, surrender will deliver us in its grace. As two become one ... we'll make this discovery, close your eyes then come to me...together we'll know ecstasy. Janet Marie repost from open 6 ... cuz me muse is missing still   I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awwww, I sure loved that poem...very much. Thanks for sharing. Sauni |
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Jan Birney New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 4 |
your poem speaks my language. innocently erotic. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful love in poetry Liz |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Man is it hot in here or what? jm- this was a wonderful tease eeerrr I mean work. (deep breath) ok. Loved this, and the passion and vision is way too real. It is hard to type with your eyes closed and your hands wiping your brows.  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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*~Amidala~* New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 2 |
I like this poem a lot! Thank you for reposting it!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Got them closed Janet. Yep I can feel it. You got us all going. "dream this dream that we both share see the flame of candles glowing envision all of this fantasy's pleasures whisper your secrets...say my name as two become one....we'll make this discovery close your eyes then come to me...together we'll know ecstasy." Very well done Janet...thanks for bringing it back and sharing. |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Ok ok ok, geeze! So i loved this poem! Speaks to me in ways few could imagine, well at least one, and she live 1300 miles away from me. I think this is wonderfull Janet........ Michael G |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely, Janet!! For people like me who haven't seen your archived poetry, when you repost it is a real treat! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Janny~ Beautiful piece sorry to see your muse is missing in action...well I'm sure you have lots of poems you can repost from the past and we love every one of em so we don't mind  Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey JM!!! This is beautiful baby...more to say, but in an "e", okay? LOL...later-lust-gator! |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Oh my, what can I even begin to say. This is awesome! I think I have a sweat mustache (LOL). Adding to my library, posting on my bedroom wall, whisper to a friend late at night... |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
How the beauty in the words how the sullen loss of my birds have brought me back to you again I hold before you A poets pen I can be as you wish A companions heart A granted wish A poem is yours for you to see To learn and to love perpetually Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is beautiful, JM! Corinne |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
A very enjoyable poem, it had a fun flowyness that made me want to read it all day, loved it . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Seems like you are lighting the poetic muse of a lot of people, Janet...this poem is hot! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Jan I really miss your muse, but thanks for the repost. It is wonderful to catch up your poems that I have missed. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
JM as always beautifully wrtiien work! fantastic-ness always comes from your pen. (i made a new word!) the phrase "innocent sin"... wowser. it's a rationalization, but i'm sure no one minds. also, i liked: "Close your eyes and lay your body down, in my essence ... sweetly drown. Whisper your secrets ... say my name, in these moments, hearts know no shame." the whole thing was very...vivid to say the least. thanks for the repost. i'll have to rewrite another song...or maybe an original... =) We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!! Shall we have a hunt for the missing muse? Try the Challenge Forum..there are some interesting challenges there!  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Janet Marie, allow me to say in my own shy and demure way... HERE I COME!!!!!! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Mmmm... just lovely JM!!! Passionate and so tantalizing ... excellent poem my dear! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Adrienne Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 20California |
A splendid way with words to show such passion.... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I just love this, it is one of your best! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Great choice for a repost, JM. I don't think I had ever seen this one. Thanks. Rick |
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