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Not In Her Storm
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Not In Her Storm |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Not In Her Storm I see the clouds rolling in and oh how it looks like rain And it is always I fight for the welcome change When it rains it pours on this heart of mine So, I take the storms I feel to her each time... But I know she has lived under her own pouring rain Yet under her water her heart still doesn't change She can walk away from what hangs overhead And, not in her storm, are words left unsaid... Not in her storm have I ever felt alone Her storm ends, so I, may find my way home It's for me that she pushes away her own rain So, that I may find comfort in calling her name... She lives in this world for the sake of another's heart God, how she eases the miles when worlds apart And she never wanders when your world falls through Not ever in her storm would she do this to you... She has wings that I know not only I can see Cause only an angel could find strength to carry me It's the way that the eyes can surely view How her heart's written so clearly in what an angel can do... Not in her storm is her work ever done And even in her storm she hands me the sun When her world is dark- I always have light And now how I hold the new color of night... She takes then she gives to an unhappy face So that many can find an awesome place I have been able to love her more every day And with her hand in mine the clouds roll away... Not in any storm that I will ever live beneath Could ever change what I hold here inside of me Not in any of her storms have I lost my angels touch To that angel out there, I love her so much... Saundra Sauni :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Saunni...... This is as beautiful and flowing as your "Mountains", and I loved it, also. You have a feel for capturing nature and putting into words.......... Puts my heart at peace..... Life is but a dream... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I like to be that heart of yours. What a way to create a flow. Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Another nice and flowing poem from you... It has been a treat today reading your poems... regards, sudhir |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Well worth the wait Saunni...lovely and welcome to Passions |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
Beautiful poem my dear!cant wait to see more! ~EroseGrover~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW what a wonderful, touching poem. I enjoyed this very much  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow..this poem is absolutely beautiful the rhyme is excellent as is the imagery but its the emotions and devotion of it that give it its grace wonderful writing love the storm metaphor and theme very cool poem welcome to passions nice to meet you take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I see the clouds rolling in and oh how it looks like rain And it is always I fight for the welcome change When it rains it pours on this heart of mine So, I take the storms I feel to her each time... But I know she has lived under her own pouring rain Yet under her water her heart still doesn't change She can walk away from what hangs overhead And, not in her storm, are words left unsaid... Not in her storm have I ever felt alone Her storm ends, so I, may find my way home It's for me that she pushes away her own rain So, that I may find comfort in calling her name... Wow this is so beautiful. I love nature and all there is about it and you do it justice with your wonderful imagery. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Great poem, welcome to passions, you have made a great start, if you keep going like that you will be the greatest poet of all time . Enjoyed it thanks, I hope to read some more of yours . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow..another good one from you! Enjoyed this very much.  |
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