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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-11 02:34 PM

I complete nothing
My presence is unbound
Not unlike the air that swirls
Dust to devils from the ground.
I wlk with passion
My mind always in flex
Being told I feel all to much
My generous words I fail.
To this passion of sound
That writing does provide
My only source of release
In a world I would not subscribe.
And gentle waves of evening
That crest upon my heart
Take fire from my comfort
As I begin to write.

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

1 posted 2000-07-11 02:41 PM

Wow! What a wonderful poem you have here.

I enjoyed this very much.

"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
Eden Phillpotts
*Cassandra Roseen*

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-11 03:12 PM

Being told I feel all to much
My generous words I fail.
To this passion of sound
That writing does provide
My only source of release
In a world I would not subscribe.
And gentle waves of evening
That crest upon my heart
Take fire from my comfort
As I begin to write.
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You write my heart with this one Michael..
all poets hearts...
this is exquisite...
writing with depth and soul
with gentle frailty
take care poet friend
jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you
MB20

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2000-07-11 06:12 PM

wonderfully written Michael.

My generous words I fail.
To this passion of sound
That writing does provide
My only source of release
In a world I would not subscribe.
And gentle waves of evening
That crest upon my heart
Take fire from my comfort
As I begin to write.

an excellent description of a writers heart

"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-07-11 06:35 PM

Michael.....

   You said it so well........

   ..writing does provide my only source
              of release..

   this really is hearfelt, for all of us,
               I think.......

Hold life with an open hand....leaving it room to grow....

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