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What I Want in a Man!!!!!!!
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What I Want in a Man!!!!!!! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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someone who can be tender and caring who can be passionate and wild someone who reads french poetry and takes time to play with a child someone who I can lean on for support yet someone in need of support too someone who absolutely adores me and someone whose love is so true someone who feels music in his soul who can admit he has real fears someone who takes the time to see me who is not afraid to cry real tears someone who believes in romance who can discover the treasures of my heart someone who wants to encourage our love who is tortured while we are apart someone who can laugh at life's trials whose heart is gentle and kind someone who can forgive my wrongs and wants to know the secrets of my mind someone who lays down to sleep at night with a strong, soft shoulder to cradle me someone who is my soul mate for life who lets me fly so high and free "Our life, exempt from public haunt, finds tongues in trees, books in the running brooks, sermons in stones, and good in everything." --William Shakespeare |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
heather - what about kicking kitties??? Did you accidently leave that part out??? This is a very sweet poem, pure feminine through and through. naturally, I am all these things for lil Lorelei *nodding selfassuredly* - just ask her *sweating profusely at the thought of lil Heather taking up my dare* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
and sometimes I just think, a lady would be good enough for me... LOL just kidding...  nice sentimental overture, this one... someone who is my soul mate for life who lets me fly so high and free regards, sudhir P.S. I am duh on french, but I can try!!!  |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Nice poem Let me know if you actually find him..... maybe he has a friend just like him!!! hahaha excellent writing |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
This is wonderful !! ~someone who lays down to sleep at night with a strong, soft shoulder to cradle me someone who is my soul mate for life who lets me fly so high and free~ You must have peeked over my shoulder while I was thanking my Jim for being this kind of special love! This is a great read and you should submit it to the book! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wonderful "shopping list" let me know what stor you find him in...lol JUST KIDDING GUYS...... all us chicks already know there all right here in PASSIONS... gotta love a poet LOL AT LONG JOHN....(kickin kitties) you just kill me pirate-gator great poem Heather.... you should check out JP's post in the alley.. or maybe thats what inspired this lol later-poet-gators jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
*shining naulks* Eric "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
If you find him ask if he's got a friend! Great poem. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I am ROFL LJ!! Ya dork! I will ask her cuz I am gonna see her in a few weeks...unless yer skeered to come see me now????? Thanks btw, since I am a female...feminine was my goal *wink* ~H PS NO KICKIN KITTIES YA MEAN OLD SEA DOG PPS Oh and all these replies I didn't see before I posted this...lol thanks guys I think he's out there somewhere....*sly grin* [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What an amazing poet you are! NEVER have I been described so accurately!!! even down to the minute detail of needing support  I just can't thank you enough, Heather |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
'Deer, you KNEW I had written this just for you...*sigh* and I thought I had kept it hidden so well..... *sly wink* ~H |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Can I sit in on the interviews please????...*g* HUGS |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wish I had paid more attention in french class.  a really beautiful poem. Could the guy who fits the qualifications of the poem please stand up."I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Aw girlie! If you find extras send 'em my way. *winkie winkie* LOL Lovely poem dearie.  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Heather - I think you found a real sweetie in 'Deer. Be sure you give him your phone number. psst, 'Deer, after you woo Heather and then dump her, will you pass along her phone number to me??? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I once met a man who had all of these traits, I found him at 7-11. He was there on the shelf, just waiting for dates and promising all the girls heaven. So, I soon decided to lay down my bread and buy him before the inflation. I then brought him home in a brown paper bag -- Oh what a Convenient relation! I studied the packaging, reviewed the stats all printed in the advertising. And then when I let the man out of the box I found out some things so surprising! He wasn't the same man I thought I had bought - the ads for him were quite deceiving. And although I bought him at such a small price, his marketing had me believing! So, I tried to take him right back to the store and get a refund for my trouble. You know what the clerk said when I took him back? Well, he laughed and then he charged me double! Well, ever since then,I made up my mind, my career needed somewhat revising. And so I decided to go back to school... and now I work in ADVERTISING!  *wink*Whoops... forgot to say.... LOVED your poem, Heather... hehe... I'm so sorry... sometimes I get inspired and carried away... [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Hey LJ...my phone number is 1-976-BABE. *wink* I love all your replies guys!! Too much fun! ~Heather |
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