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Soul by the pound
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Soul by the pound |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
With these strong rhymes that my pen's carving, I'm gonna bring forth that sweet soul like Marvin, to fulfill any soul that was left starving. Like the words of a preacher, I speak the message, that was give from God, the man who addressed it. Everytime I read my poems in public, I command and control, the audience hearts because, I 'm rich in soul. My words bring forth the pain, the cries, and all the happiness for your soul to rise cause like the Old Man River, I'm dark and deep, and like a mountain top, I keep it nice and steep. I believe that I have a chance, to become a famous poet because, my poetic abilities, leave people in awe of me. For a better world, I suggest some soul because, everyone wants to achieve their goals. I know that I ain't gonna end up in no prison cell and make the rest of my life a living hell because, there's a big world out there, and lots of chances for me to excel. With these rhymes, I'm gonna rock and roll, and erase all doubts that I don't have soul because, I'm a true God-made giver, that has soul, instead of alcohol in my liver. Just like a muslim, I'm keeping it real because whatever's in my heart, I say what I feel because, this tongue holds for noone, as the truth in me, burns like cajun, that's waiting to be triggered and fired, like bullets from a gun. If any of you want beef by the pound, you better head to Meattown because, you won't find none here cause, I'm choppin it up, soul by the pound! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"sweet soul like Marvin..." mmm, hmmm... I like, I like... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Serenity, for your nice comments Nathan |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
It is really great to see someone with so much self-confidence. Some have none, and even those that have a little, all to often seem to keep it hidden. Excellent work! Really enjoyed it! A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Because I'm a true God-made giver that has soul instead of alcohol in his liver just like a muslim, I'm keeping it real because whatever's in my heart, I say what I feel." Strong lines of poetry. I believe that your writing is real and true to life...james |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Nice to see you back, and in good form, Nate! Well done! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
When we speak what is 'real', it is usually well received! Nice to see you again, Nate!  Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Denise, for your sweet comments! Nathan |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Nate Dogg, a truely soulful poem. Sing it proud. A wonderful poem. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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