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My Pulsing Star
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My Pulsing Star |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
A pulsing star shines bright in the night Twinkling my love so true Never letting me give up without a fight when my heart was blue. The night aurora lights the sky with a veil of happiness many nights I've dreamed of you never knowing if it were true. An emerald sea lays still in the night telling the tale of my love helping me to see the truth of what now lies above. You taught me how to fly again when my heart didn't know how and with a tear of happiness I let my heart go now. A pulsing star shines bright in my sky showing me the way never failing to grasp my love so we may fly together so far away. "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Dawn, a lovely poem, beautiful images. I really enjoyed reading this poem. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The night aurora lights the sky with a veil of happiness many nights I've dreamed of you never knowing if it were true. An emerald sea lays still in the night telling the tale of my love helping me to see the truth of what now lies above. You taught me how to fly again when my heart didn't know how and with a tear of happiness I let my heart go now. --------------- Dawn, this poem is EXQUISITE... what a beautiful poem such lovely imagery ... laced with such heartfelt emotions wonderful writing a perfect tribute to your "shining star" take care jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely beautiful Cassers! I'm so glad to see happiness in you, sweetie girl.  You keep on flying with those stars that you love so much, my friend. *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Very beautiful, my friend! I loved this one muchly, I like to see that happy spirit shine through Fly with the stars, for with love beneath your wings you can go anywhere.Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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