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Blue Bar Blues |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Do you have to take forever?? Can't you see that I can't wait?? You are loading much too slowly... and you're going to make me late! I'm sitting here just glued to you.. blue bar upon my screen... There are times you hit like lightening.. But not tonight....I think you're mean!! You seem to sense my need to race through pages, searches, sites... You slow me down, you change my pace, You clip my wings in flight!! It doesn't matter what I do, or even what I say... I can't seem to control you, you keep changing every day!! Well, here I sit--you made me late... and then you disconnected!!!!!! After all my waiting just for you, now my anger's resurrected!!!!! You thought you'd teach me how to wait, and patience by the score.... Well, I think that I'll just turn you off, and head on out the door!!!!!!! See Ya!!!!!!! Life is but a dream... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
 too cool. I like how you can take any subject and make it wonderful...you have a way with words there! I look forward to reading more also.Sauni |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thanks Saunni... This one came from some actual trouble I'm having getting loaded....I mean loading the pages..... So, I think I'll see y'all tomorrow..... Keep writing 'cause I'm looking forward to more great reading from you...... ~~~Sunny1~~~ Life is but a dream... |
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