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Crashing Waves - Haiku
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Crashing Waves - Haiku |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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Overpowering The crashing waves of our love Immersing our souls |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
you sure drowned me with this gem Mr Pirate guy.... come to Halifax with the wife the tall ships are coming. Parker |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Souls immersed as one Awaft upon cresting seas All waves surmounted |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Haleyja - I saw the Tall Ships yesterday - They passed through Cape Cod Canal on their way to Boston - AWESOME SIGHT!!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hey, LongJohn, how lovely this is, the fair Loralei will love it! Corinne |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Parker - I wish we could. I missed the tall ships when they came to baltimore - I was off on travel at the time. I'll be heading south to hatteras the next time I hit the road. have a great time when the ships sail in - take care of all the old timer sailors, buy them lost of rum, etc. Nan - your Haiku is what I wanted to write!  BeautifulCorinne - thank you ever so much. I hope she reads it and understands how I feel. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LongJohn~ A lovely Haiku ... Lorelei will indeed love it !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mike, yours is better - I just threw this together while I was sposed to be teaching an English class.. Rum? They all went to Walmart to buy bluejeans...  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Sometimes I'm afraid to lay claim to being the subject of your sweet writing Mike...but everything I read I know it comes from your heart...no matter if it be sweet or angry, funny or sad, and deep in your heart is where our loves lives I know. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Geez!!! Ballads, haikus, feline homicide.....LongJohn, you can do it all.....!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb sir!! I can just hear the waves. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Beautiful sir...i do wish i will feel those torrential waves some day |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Wow....so HOT!!  MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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