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Your Angel of Love
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Your Angel of Love |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Your Angel of Love When phantoms of dark are invading your sleep And your heart is unsettled with vision’s unrest May I come to your bedside when shadows are deep And chase them away with a whisper of breath May I please be your angel of love Let me take you to places of endless delight To celestial spaces you’ve never been shown As I hover above you and drink in the sight Of your essence, your spirit so lost and alone May I please be your angel of love May I spread my soft angel wings over your flesh May I shine halo glow to the deep of your eyes May I fill up your chamber with fresh floral scents May I pleasure your heart with angelic surprise May I please be your angel of love Come into my warmth and be wrapped in my need Let me kiss your sweet lips with succulent’s pour Let old phantom visions perish with greed You will soar on a cloud of content ever more May I please be your angel of love Just dream of an angel and I will appear I will take away thoughts of dark dragons and such I'll remove all bad visions of trembling and fear And awake you to the feel of a soft angel touch Think only good thoughts and then look up above Descending upon you, your angel of love Elizabeth Santos |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Let me take you to places of endless delight To celestial spaces you’ve never been shown As I hover above you and drink in the sight Of your essence, your spirit so lost and alone May I please be your angel of love This was breathtaking. I loved it! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Elizabeth, this is so beautiful. I like the format. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
It's hard to find a site were good poetry resides ... I think I finally found one ... Beautiful imagery ... Nice work. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely poetry Liz... by the way, do you teach poetry somewhere? I would be honoured to be a student in your class...  I will be attentive, I promise...regards, sudhir |
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michelax Junior Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 16Malta |
Liz, care to fly this way? - Great! - Michelax |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely, lovely, lovely... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
How could the answer ever be no with a heart felt plea such as this. I hope it landed safely where you intended it too. Someone will be blessed indeed. Lovely piece. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz... ohhh yeahhh. This is so wonderful. I love you lasy verse especially - the descending angel - remarkable - You are a wonderful writer... egads, there I go using that "wonderful" word twice. I'm overwhelmed, so its OK. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I think I liked Michelax answer the best. Could you fly this way? An exquisite poem and it would be very hard to come up with a better one. Love Sy |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I am left breathless as always by your thoughts. thank you. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let me take you to places of endless delight To celestial spaces you’ve never been shown As I hover above you and drink in the sight Of your essence, your spirit so lost and alone May I please be your angel of love May I spread my soft angel wings over your flesh May I shine halo glow to the deep of your eyes May I fill up your chamber with fresh floral scents May I pleasure your heart with angelic surprise May I please be your angel of love Come into my warmth and be wrapped in my need Let me kiss your sweet lips with succulent’s pour Let old phantom visions perish with greed You will soar on a cloud of content ever more May I please be your angel of love --------------------- only an angel IN love could write this exquisite poem... MY GOSH THIS IS STUNNING ... Liz this is just so very beautiful such tender gentle sensual emotions and such a grace of vulnerablity about it I adore this poem... and the poet who wrote it  take care sweetcheeks..K? love ya jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, angel~ You could be and probably are the most delightful angel I've found by far Within the span of the wings of time we've come to know a sweet angel of rhyme ... and we call her name Elizabeth Love you gentle friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. Sudhir, you make me laugh on a daily basis with your remarks. But thank you all so vry much for reading. Your comments mean a lot liz |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Liz, This is such a beautiful piece. All about an angel written by an angel. Lovely writing!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Gotta say I LOVED this one!!! I was totally absorbed by that angel of love!! ;-) Thanks for sharing this!! If you can't make it so, you need to let it go! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Elizabeth! I love it! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lone Wolf, THanks for all the reading. Your comments are very kind Kitty, Glad you liked it so much Denise, Still keeping up!. How do you do it? Thanks, dear Liz |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful poetry, Liz....simply lovely! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Wow Elizabeth.. what a vision.. your poetry always speaks, and this one whispers.. like the beating of an angel's wings.. or were they yours..? again, I'm astounded by such great writing..Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Liz, another precious jewel from you. What can I say? After replying to so many of your pieces, all of them just sheer beauty, you run out of things to say. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Liz, Well I am sad and all I have to do is read one of your poems and then every thing seems to just disapear and was all just a bad dream, thank you so much friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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