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Love is a Mighty Thing
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Love is a Mighty Thing |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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(just playing around) Love is a Mighty Thing Love is a mighty thing to its arrow she is tethered yearning for its mad embrace stakes her to her dream’s desire yearning for its mad embrace molds her movement through a day she would gladly trip and fall unto the path that true love takes she would gladly trip and fall and cross the mighty sunlit gorge to reach its heather and its stream molds her movement through a day To reach its heather and its stream and climb the mountain of desire to hear the call of whippoorwill under the tree in morning’s still to hear the call of whippoorwill she would gladly trip and fall mold her movement through the day for in its arrow she is tethered To climb the mountain of desire yearning for its mad embrace under the tree of morning’s still love is a mighty thing |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, jeez! and now...perfect structure. I'm gonna take up drawing cartoons. Beautiful, beautiful..... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, Your putting us all to shame here. There must be a name for the verse, or did you invent the pattern of this verse, I am clueless and could never do it Marvelous, Martie [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh my--what is it in you that finds such grace in bringing your words to life. I am hunbled at your mastery and bow to you now in praise. EXCELLENT VISION AND IMAGERY!!!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, as Balladeer put it, "oh, jeez"... "just playing around", eh? We're in super trouble if you ever get serious! Wonderful, Martie, just wonderful. jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Balladeer--If this is perfect structure then I am perfectly surprised...You are cute though! Yes, Liz...I guess I invented, it's called, just playing around...and I was...I'm glad you liked it. Mark--You have made me blush with your praise...thank you so much! jwesley--jeez...then we are in trouble, cause I am serious about playing around.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Ah .... the ~Martie-nique~ structure ... Well, I always said your writing was unique. This just proved me right ! ! This is absolutely lovely, my friend. ~*Marge*~ |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Martie ... For just playing around, you've put together some great structure in this piece ... Worth going through the board again ... I love little snipets that keep bring one back to the thrust of a piece ... Nice work ... |
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