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In Tear-Stained Loss
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In Tear-Stained Loss |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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©2000 Christopher Ward by indictment bitter ache cried I doubts doleful dirge loss anger love loss crystaled sprinkling -jaded mem’ries ca sc ade crumbled a dull reminiscence ~brilliance~ the light of hoping once betrayed appointed pain un-anointed reign by jealousy of heart-hurt scorned malice wrought in ill-fate ...judgement of moments spent in un-alone |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Christopher* This aches with betrayal and lost love....Your gift of imagery shines in this and your flair of the "dark" calls~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Geez, Christopher, can you SEE THROUGH THE SCREEN? "judgement of moment spent in un-alone..." hmmm...scary...(serenity crosses legs, blushing...) Thanks for this one this 'morn...enjoyed muchly.... |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
sigh crystaled sprinkling -jaded mem’ries ca sc ade crumbled a dull reminiscence ~brilliance~ the light of hoping once betrayed You write to burst apart the stoniest of hearts, m'friend. This aches. wow Chris BOL N. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was awesome Chris m'friend  ~H |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A true work of art. I loved the style of this. Keep 'em coming. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
well this leaves one tingling... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Chris, this sent a chill down my spine. Fantastic poem. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the title alone is pure poetry and the poems emotions dressed in that very cool presentation is poetry in motion. excellent Chris, truly later-cascade-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
An emotional offering of a poem, this one with great presentation... such a lovely feel to it... Christopher, this is excellent writing... coming from you, no surprise at all... enjoyed the reading very much regards, sudhir. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well now... you know what I think of cascade...that visuality gets me. I don't see this as betrayal of love as such...no not at all. Hope is harder than love sometimes. A breath of a poem, written in a breath, that takes the breath. Awesome.  K[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is brill, Chris! The visual effect was so good. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I ache for you Superb poem and presentation from the perfectionist, himself Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This piece is wonderful in every way Christopher. I do so like your presentation Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Great poem, thissaid a lot, and the imagery was great . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Thank you all for your reponses! I was worried I might have been a bit too obtuse with this one! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful format Christopher ... it flowed so beautifully with your sentiments! Truly enjoyed this I did! Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
*Bows before the master of free-form* This was beautiful, Chris. But then again, I never expect anything less from you. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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